Shaw's Sketchbook ***NSFW***

[LoreLei_Shaw]

Please be kind, I appreciate constructive criticism but I do know that I need work. These are mostly my versions of images that I've found. They are all done free hand and in pencil as my medium. Forgive me if the pages are bent, they are quite literally in my sketchbook.

 

[MacCloud]

I am not much of an art critic but they look great to me. Proportions are all good, really loved the bottom pic! The top pic she appears a bit elvin which I don't think was intended but it makes the picture more cute then erotic to me? I think you did really good, shading looks good on all to me and that is tough with pencil. I really don't see anything to view as needing corrected? I see the hand on the third pic is even shadowed on her butt where her nails are being dragged across.

 

[LoreLei_Shaw]

Thank you MacCloud. And you are right, it wasn't intentional. I must have erased and tried again a dozen times until I finally just gave up. Thank you for noticing.

 

[CasualVelociraptor]

The second picture for some reason reminds me of Luke Cage and Jessica Jones. Perhaps that wasn't your intent, but it certainly conveys raw chemistry like what we saw on that show!

 

[LoreLei_Shaw]

That is a good bet, I think it suits them. I do need to work on it. I wanted my proportions to be off for that picture but I think I over did it.

 

[CasualVelociraptor]

In any case, you’re definitely an artist to watch. Are you doing any RPs at the moment?

 

[LoreLei_Shaw]

Thank you. That is very kind of you. And yes, I do have a couple active games going.

 

[MadMax]

The second picture looks like the characters from our role play, LoreLei. Captures them perfectly.

 

[LoreLei_Shaw]

I need to do them better. They were actually my inspiration to draw. It was my first one.

 

[LoreLei_Shaw]

ROUND II



This was done free-hand. I really don't like how it turned out and I wanted to add way more depth to this but I just couldn't get the angles right. If anyone has a picture of what I'm trying to capture here, could you be a doll and message me it? I am having a hard time with this one. I'd really like to redue it.




This one was done off a picture I found. I think I could have done a better job on the fingers. But I really loved the close up image, I hope I got it right.

 

[LewisPotter]

I don't see why you'd wish to redo the first one it looks great. I understand the pose your after and will see if I can find material to practice from. Very good art here makes me jealous and skittle itchy on my own art fingers.

 

[MacCloud]

I really don''t see what yo want to change? Just to play devils's advocate here the top one if you maybe worked on her nose, giving it more shape? The mouth is so graphic you can hear her moans. Love the way she clutched the sheets. The second is very graphic love the way you displayed the dripping pussy and her face is perfectly intense on what she is doing. on both !

 

[CasualVelociraptor]

Maybe the guy’s hand in the first one is a little large relative to her head but that was the only flaw I noticed. Everything else is great!

 

[LoreLei_Shaw]

I really don''t see what yo want to change? Just to play devils's advocate here the top one if you maybe worked on her nose, giving it more shape? The mouth is so graphic you can hear her moans. Love the way she clutched the sheets. The second is very graphic love the way you displayed the dripping pussy and her face is perfectly intense on what she is doing. on both !

Yeah, I really don't like how her nose came out. And I guess it just doesn't have the rawness I was trying to get from my head.

 

[LoreLei_Shaw]

I don't see why you'd wish to redo the first one it looks great. I understand the pose your after and will see if I can find material to practice from. Very good art here makes me jealous and skittle itchy on my own art fingers.

Thanks Lewis!

 

[MacCloud]

Have you ever looked at this DA page?

faile35 - Traditional Artist | DeviantArt

www.deviantart.com

 

[LoreLei_Shaw]

Have you ever looked at this DA page?

faile35 - Traditional Artist | DeviantArt

www.deviantart.com

Thanks MacCloud. I will look into him.

 

[MacCloud]

Thanks MacCloud. I will look into him.

I really like his stories if you do maybe we could pick one and do a spin off sometime. Just talking there, I am really enjoying our current RP.

I did a sort of spin off of his cleric story in scify using imported alien cannibals to trap the investigating officers. Than MC was he boyfriend went after her and rescued her! His 30+ drawingd for his capture scenes was really fantastic

 

[LoreLei_Shaw]

ROUND III

Tried my hand at pen, bloody hell it takes a lot more confidence then I expected. Not great, needs work. Let me know what you think?

Yay me! Stepped way out of my comfort zone for this. My first homosexual sketch. Gotta admit, I kinda like it. This was fun to draw. I do need to work on male features.

 

[Beautiful Happenstance]

I must admit your shading is phenomenal for pencil medium.
Like, I'm blown away by it in that first couple you posted.